Category: Writing

  • Catastrophe a 2010 StoryPros Awards Finalist

    I am pleased to share that my feature screenplay Catastrophe made it to the Finalist round of the 3rd Annual StoryPros Awards Screenplay Contest. Catastrophe‘s logline is: “In a world of superheroes and supervillains an unsuccessful disaster insurance salesman becomes a supervillain to save his job.”

    I started writing Catastrophe just over a year ago for my Feature Screenwriting class at the New York Film Academy. This spring, after many revisions, I entered the screenplay in several contests. I’m very excited that the script made it as far as the Finalist stage of the StoryPros contest. The story is a mix of action and dark comedy and one of my New York Film Academy instructors favorably referred to it as an indie comedy colliding with a summer blockbuster.

    The logline for Catastrophe and other feature and television scripts I have available or am in the process of revising are available to view on my Loglines page in the Screenwriting section.

  • A Story of Their Own: Women and Film

    Last week we lost both Dennis Hopper and Gary Coleman two icons of cinema and television. There’s been plenty said and I don’t have anything to add really. The news about their deaths reminded me of a few other celebrity deaths recently and I remembered a post I’d read on Feministing early last week. The post was about Dorothy Kamenshek, a women’s baseball player of the 1940s, who was the basis for Geena Davis’ character Dotti Hinson in Penny Marshall’s 1993 film A League of Their Own. Kamenshek also died this May at the age of 84. The post got me thinking about the film, a personal favorite, and about women in sports and in filmmaking.

    The Feministing post about Kamenshek discusses her history in the All-American Girls Professional Baseball League (AAGPBL) and briefly mentions the film inspired by the league before talking about women’s sports. Unfortunately, as pointed out on Feministing, the status of women in sports isn’t much better than it was back in the 1940s and 50s. The WNBA doesn’t get much respect and stunts to attract more fans like those featured in A League of Their Own are still common. It’s unfortunate not just that we insist on sex-segregated sports associations and leagues, but that the excuses about women’s physical abilities that are used to perpetuate that segregation are further used to dismiss their athletic associations.

    I’m not a big sports fan. There are a few sports I like to watch on occasion. One of them is baseball. I like the sport and the aesthetic of the sport. I was very into it when I was a kid, but that faded for awhile. When I moved from Alaska to New York I decided that, since I finally had a home team to root for, I would try to follow the sport again. I’m now passively following The Mets’ current season. My love of baseball has mostly been focused on baseball films for the last decade or so. That includes A League of Their Own.

    A League of Their Own was one of those movies in the 90s that, like Frank Darabont’s The Shawshank Redemption, showed up again and again on the basic cable channels we had. If you had cable and were bored, you could almost always catch A League of Their Own or The Shawshank Redemption. So, I’ve seen the movie many many times. My wife is often subjected to me randomly saying “There’s no crying in baseball.” This statement is usually not related to anything. It’s just a scene that I’ve always enjoyed and it pops into my head every now and again. We re-watched the movie recently and I enjoyed it just as much as I had all those times on basic cable.

    Just as the movie has some unfortunate parallels to modern women’s sports, there is something to consider about women in filmmaking here, as well. Even though there are, and have been, women executives in television and film, and even with this year’s Academy Award for Directing going to Kathryn Bigelow, the status of women in filmmaking isn’t much better than the status of the women’s baseball players in A League of Their Own. Characters and the women who play them are subject to dismissiveness and harassment similar to the treatment of the  players in the film.

    Women and Hollywood recently covered Megan Fox’s departure from the second Transformers sequel (Fox says she quit and Bay claims he chose not to pick up her contract). The analysis of the situation is interesting. A lot of others have approached the story by saying “good riddance” and have taken shots at Fox. For the last year there have been reports about Fox claiming that Bay was abusive, and reports of those who have supported Bay and accused Fox of being inappropriate and, I believe, “spoiled.” The comments on the Women and Hollywood post cover more about general sexism and harassment of women, particularly young women, in the film industry. It got me thinking about the need to be aware of the situation and to make an effort to change it by being better.

    As a screenwriter, how can I affect this? What can I do in my role to try and be better than the attitudes that permeate the industry? I think it comes down to being a better writer. By that I mean being aware of how I write women characters and making sure to make them whole people who exist outside of the desires or goals of men. I don’t think I’ve been successful enough at this in my writing so far. I think this is something I need to work on as a writer. It’s not explicitly about being a feminist or trying to depict women positively, it’s about making myself a better writer.

    I think A League of Their Own offers a good example of how to create a woman-centric movie that doesn’t just perpetuate the same ideas of womanhood. The film isn’t really about AAGPBL; it’s not about women being able to do the same things as men; it’s not about sexism, or romance, or any of those things. It touches on all those things, but it’s not explicitly about those things. The film is about two sisters. It’s about the older sister, Dottie, letting go and letting her younger sister, Kit, be her own woman. It’s about Kit growing up enough to earn Dottie’s respect. Men figure in, but they are all supporting characters, and while some of them have transformative arcs, they aren’t central to the plot. The story is about these two sisters and their relationship.

    As a screenwriter, those are the sort of women characters that I need to write more of. They are the sort of women characters we all need to write more of. If we write more characters that aren’t there for the sake of men, perhaps we can help, in a small way, counteract the directors, producers, executives, and others throughout the industry who mistreat the hardworking women of the industry.

    What other strong female characters can we use as an example to inspire us in our writing?

  • Screenplay Structure and Outlining

    This morning I was doing some blog reading and came across Screenwriter411’s post STRUCTURE – The 9 Essential Scenes. It’s a good post about the necessity of structuring your story and outlining in screenwriting.

    I’m a fan of structure. What I have never been a fan of is outlining and planning. I find outlining frustrating. I would much rather be writing. I just want to jump in and do it. I think most people would rather just write than spend the time planning.

    As I started writing scripts before attending New York Film Academy’s (NYFA) Screenwriting Program I would get stalled a lot. The stories were always missing steps. When I attended NYFA we were introduced to basic screenplay structures and methods of planning and outlining a script. I didn’t care for them at first ,because of the aforementioned hatred of planning and outlining. Eventually, I came around and realized that my stories are much better developed and structured when I take the time to plan and outline before getting into the meat of the script.

    I’ve developed a sort of intermediary outlining method between what I learned in school and my own aversion to outlining. My method is to create an outline defining eight sequences across three acts. The sequences I got from school and different teachers had different names for them but they were all talking about basically the same thing. They are roughly based around Joseph Campbell’s “The Hero’s Journey.”

      Act One

    1. “Ordinary Life”
    2. “The Call to Adventure”
    3. Act Two

    4. “Rules of the New World”
    5. “Plan Number One”
    6. “Happy/Sad”
    7. “All is Lost”
    8. Act Three

    9. “The Final Battle”
    10. “Aftermath”

    That’s the structure I use for outlining. I create a simple text document and plug in a description of what should happen in each sequence. When I have specific ideas for scenes I write descriptions of those scenes. Otherwise the outline is very general. This mostly works for me. Still, I get stalled sometimes. I know something is missing or that a particular sequence is weak but I’m not sure yet how to fix it.

    I think the structure offered on Screenwriter411 might just be the solution to my problem. On Screenwriter411’s post nine key scenes are described.

    1. The Opening
    2. What’s on Page 10
    3. Crossing the Threshold
    4. Pinch Point One
    5. The Midpoint
    6. Pinch Point Two
    7. End of Act Two
    8. The Climax
    9. The Final Scene

    I like these. These are what I’ve been missing. I plan to integrate these scenes into my future outlining process. They fit very nicely into my existing process with the acts and sequences.

    This is just an early step in the planning process. I have been trying to make a habit of writing “Step Outlines” (some have called them “Beat Sheets”) before digging into the script after this. It’s been a bit of a fight with myself to better integrate these planning stages to my writing process but I’m slowly winning out and it’s improving my scripts.

    I’m interested in hearing other outlining and structure methods, if you’d like to share them in the comments.